A Nature Poem:
Water
I take on numerous forms big and small
I can cause devastating destruction
Or be a wonderful source of entertainment
When I freeze I become rock solid
When I get too hot I evaporate (5)
People base their careers off of me
They plan their homes around me
I am perhaps one of the oldest ways of travel
To safely venture onto or into me requires a special skill
Although I can be dangerous I am the greatest extinguisher (10)
I take up seventy percent of the earth
And sixty-five percent of your body
You drink me
You clean with me
You cook with me (15)
You even paint with me
And I am the most
used substance on earth
Yet I am disappearing
I am not only on the earth but I also come from the sky
When snow melts I am there in its absence (20)
When I am clean I am crystal clear
When I am dirty I become murky and gray
I am sensitive to my surroundings
Though no human has conquered me
They have caused me some damage (25)
Although the desert is dry you can find me in a cactus
I am beautiful
I am strong
I am uncontrollable
I am the definition of life (30)
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The Most Beautiful:
The Pictured Rocks of Lake Superior
The most beautiful thing I have ever seen was the rock formations along Lake
Superior in Michigan. During a recent summer vacation with my best friend and
her family, we traveled up through Wisconsin and over to the Upper Peninsula in
Michigan. Along the way, one of the
things we decided to do was take the Pictured Rock Tour. On this tour they take
you on a boat (similar to a ferry) and show you the many amazing rock
formations that have formed along this 40 mile stretch of the lake. During the
tour you are not permitted to get out of the boat and touch or explore the rocks
but there are different forest trails that you can hike along to get to them. You can also rent a kayak and paddle along
the rocks at your own pace. You are probably asking what is so special about a
few hard old gray rocks? These rocks are truly nature’s artwork. Every color of the rainbow is
represented. Some are vibrant, some are
pastel. They form gorgeous arches and have even influenced some of the nature
around them. These rocks made the trees around them grow in different
directions. Some even grew sideways out of the rock. They also formed big and
small caves. Each one offered a different surprise including different sized
waterfalls you could play in. Some of the rocks even looked as if someone had
taken water colors and painted different color streaks along them. I even saw a
few with huge holes in them that seemed to create a round picture frame in
which you could see the crystal clear water through. It looked like it belonged
on the front of a postcard. The rocks were able to support
so many diverse animals. There were eagles soaring above them.
Another thing that made this tour even better was the water. The water in Lake
Superior was amazingly clear and blue, nothing like the dirty Lake Michigan in
Chicago. It looked like Caribbean water. These formations really made me think
about how beautiful the world really is.
Word Count: 350
Native American Creation Story:
How Grass Came to Be
There was once a sky king who had one beautiful
daughter. The sky king wanted nothing more than to keep his daughter happy. One
day after playing all day on Earth with her friends, the daughter came home
with cuts and bruises all over her feet. The daughter cried all night long and
insisted that the king think of something so that her feet would not hurt when
she ran on the hard Earth. The king soon became distraught because he could not
think of any way to make the earth softer. So one day the king announced to all
of the animals on earth that he was holding a competition. He promised the winner anything he or she
desired if he or she came up with a solution to his problem. Animal after
animal came, and still there was no idea that satisfied the daughter’s wish. The
wolf suggested snow but the daughter complained it was too cold. The crab
suggested sand but she thought it was too sticky. The pig offered the idea of
adding mud, but the daughter was not happy because it was too messy. The king
became increasingly sadder each day, because his daughter was not happy. One day the tadpole arrived at the sky king’s
palace. The tadpole, as timid as he was, wondered why the ground did not have a
soft covering similar to the seaweed and algae that covered the sea floor. With
that in mind, the sky king came up with an idea that the daughter thought was
perfect. The daughter insisted that this lush carpeting be green because it was
her favorite color, and within days the king had his servants lay down the soft
carpet that we now call grass. For the tadpole’s help, he was granted one wish.
He wished to be able to live on land and experience what he helped create. So,
when the tadpole grows up he transforms into a frog.
Word Count: 326
Weather Experience:
Rain, Rain Go Away
Camping is something that my family does every
year. We take our tent, and our trailer full of camping supplies and we head to
the "wilderness" for a few days. I hate to brag but I consider our
family to be experts. We come prepared for every situation. One year we decided
to take our dogs along with us to experience the fresh air of nature. When we
got to the camp site we unpacked our stuff and began to scope out the rest of
the camp grounds. Later, when we got back we were preparing lunch when
another dog came walking by. One of my dogs, who was in the tent at the time
started going crazy, he ripped multiple holes right through the tent. We tapped
them up with duct tape and then proceeded on with our day. For days we had
perfect weather but one day it took a turn for the worse. We were getting ready
to start the fire for dinner when we saw the dark clouds rolling in. We started
the fire anyway hoping we would be done before the rain hit our campsite.
Before we could even finish that thought it started pouring rain. We packed up
everything that we could into of our food tent, and headed inside. When we got
inside we realized that the duct tape would not hold so we placed some bowls
under the holes, deciding that that would be good for the night. After that
ordeal we were all starving. We decided that we would get in the car and drive
to the nearest restaurant. We finally sat down in Cracker Barrel where we ate
our warm meal and watched the rain pour down. When we arrived back at the tent,
we took one look inside and got back in the car. A hotel sounded way better for
the night. How’s that for roughing it?
Word Count: 320
Reading Responses:
To Build a Fire
I thought that Jack
London was making an interesting point when he decided not to give the main
character a name. I believe the point that he was trying to express was a good
one. By not giving the man a name London is saying that this could be any one
of us and all men are the same. Many people believe that they are better than
everyone else, or that they won’t fall into the same trap as others, so instead
of taking precaution or listening to the advice of others they continue to be
ignorant. The man in this story made me extremely frustrated. He was too
prideful. Instead of listening to the wise older man’s advice, he wanted to do
things his own way. Then, once it was too late and situations became
detrimental he always made the same comment that he should have listened to the
old man. The man’s death was absolutely preventable if he had listened to the
old man. Another thing I found interesting in this story was the thought that
if the man had been friendlier to the dog than he might have still been alive.
The dog had these natural instincts to survive in the wild that the man did not
have. The dog continuously thought about giving the man hints and warnings
about things to come but he did not want to because he had no attachment to the
man. He said their relationship was “one being the toil slave of the other”.
The dog only needed the man to build fire “a survival tool” but if something
were to happen to the man the dog did not particularly care, for there were
other humans. Although this story was a bit frustrating to read, all in all, I
thought it taught some good lessons.
Word Count: 304
Walden
At first Walden was
confusing to me. I did not understand what his reality was and what he was
imagining. But after I understood what was going on, I came to the conclusion
that Thoreau provides an interesting outlook on humans and nature. Thoreau says
that our lives are too complicated. We don’t need all of our fancy gadgets, the
money, or the cars, etc. A simple life is a happier one. He says that “If we do
not get out sleepers, and forge rails, and devote days and nights to the work,
but go tinkering upon our lives to improve them, who will build rail roads?”
His point is that we would not have the railroads if we didn’t allow ourselves
to get caught up in building it. Thoreau has another point relating to the last
quote “If we stay at home and mind our own business, who will want railroads?
We do not ride on the railroad; it rides upon us.” I agree with that to a
certain extent. I agree with him that our society is too focused on the fancy
gadgets, and who has the best this or that to notice the joys of nature and others
around us. But, I do not think that our world should stop trying to progress.
Progress is important to the world, and I do not think that people would be
satisfied with just nature or else progress would have never have been made at
all. I think that there should be a balance between the simplicity of nature
and the modern world. In my opinion Thoreau’s ideas are a little extreme to me.
Word Count: 274
Life On the Mississippi
Life on the Mississippi
was okay. I thought it was funny that everyone wanted to be a steamboatman in
town. Coming from a large town I also found it unusual that the town’s only
source of entertainment was in watching the steamboats come in on the river. I
would think that the people in the town would try to create other sources of
entertainment. I also found it funny that the biggest ambition of the kids in
town was to be a steamboatman. No one wanted to be a doctor or lawyer or even
dreamed to get out of the town in any other way but by working on a steamboat.
This story also reminded me of how simple a child’s dreams can be. Twain says
that, “when a circus came and went, it left us all burning to become clowns;
the first Negro minstrel show that came to our section left us all suffering to
try that kind of life, …if we lived and were good…God would permit us to become
pirates.” But, those dreams were all temporary dreams. For generations, most
children aspired to be a steamboatman. Twain
says that “the ambition to be a steamboatman always remained.” I think that
that is what must happen when one has unquenchable desire to live a more
interesting life.
Word Count: 219
Thanatopsis
I liked the poem
Thanatopsis. I found Bryant’s idea of death to be way more peaceful and kind
than the usual idea of what death is supposed to be like. When I think of death
I think of it as a bad, cold, dark thing. Images of the Grimm Reaper dance
across my mind. But when Bryant talks about it in the poem in an airy way it
puts you at ease. I found it interesting that Bryant says the only way this
poem can relate to you is if you are a nature lover. I think he says this
because he describes death as one becoming united with the earth. This is
something a person who doesn’t like nature cannot appreciate. Bryant says, “and,
lost each human trace, surrendering up thine individual being, shalt thou go to
mix forever with the elements.” When Bryant says this he is referring to after
you die. This can be peaceful to a nature lover because you are a part of the
beauty that you love. You recognize the cycle of life as you are returned back
into nature. But to the non-nature lover, they may find it disturbing to be a
part of dirty nature. I really like nature so I found this poem to be very pleasant.
Word Count: 216
Nature
I enjoyed Nature I felt that Emerson’s ideas were
true. He believes that Nature is an escape from regular life. You can find
serenity in its peacefulness. In most aspects I agree, with him. I think that
when you see some nature it is able to provide that sensation because it is
truly that beautiful that your mind is transported to another place. But, when
Emerson says that any bit of open space can give you this feeling, I do not
agree. There is something about fresh air that is peaceful, but I do not think
that it is the same kind of peacefulness that Emerson is talking about. I think
that it takes more than just a field in the middle of a city to give you the
sensation Emerson explains in Nature. Emerson does provide a thought that I
really like about nature he says that “the power to produce this delight does
not reside in nature, but in man…” I think that this is very true, Emerson is
saying that if we do not open our minds to the wonders of nature and have a
positive welcoming attitude towards it then it doesn’t matter how beautiful the
nature is. Sometimes we have such negative attitudes towards things that we ate
blinded o the wonders around us. I think that this statement is definitely
true. Especially when dealing with nature. We often take it for granted and complain
about it, because there are too many bugs or its too dirty and so we don’t
enjoy ourselves. But, if we changed our outlook then nature would look
different too.
Word Count: 270
Response to Essays:
I read the three
stories Walking by Henry David Thoreau, River Driftwood by Sarah
Orne Jewett, and The Divine Soil by John Burroughs. All of the stories provided
a different outlook on some of the ways humans view nature. Walking was about how humans need to
take advantage of the wonderful nature around us. Soon, there will no more nature
to venture out into. We won’t be able to roam for miles into the forest/
nature. He believes this because humans feel that to progress we need to
develop every bit of land that doesn’t have a building on it already. Thoreau
expresses this concept by saying “At present…the best part of the land is not
private property; the landscape is not owned, and the walker enjoys comparative
freedom. But possibly the day will come when it will be partitioned off into
so-called pleasure-grounds, in which a few will take a narrow and exclusive
pleasure only, when fences shall be multiplied, and man-traps and other engines
invented to confine men to the public road, and walking over the surface
of God’s earth shall be construed to mean trespassing on some gentleman’s grounds.”
Thoreau is saying that the best thing
about the land is just experiencing nature and not developing it into something
else. I agree with Thoreau because even though he wrote this in 1862, the same
goes for now in 2012. The land we are living on is even more developed than before
and we are entering a time of environmental catastrophe. We still don’t notice
that we need to change. Near my house there was once a beautiful public golf
course, and although it was somewhat developed for human pleasure, it was still
wooded, and provided a nice habitat for many animals. Now recently it has
closed down and in its place there are a few big concrete department stores. I
think that Thoreau’s ideas were right on point. I never really realized how
much I missed the nature until man came and destroyed it.
In the story
River Driftwod I like Jewett’s point when she says that, “There is
something distressing about being eaten, and having one’s substance minister to
a superior existence! It hurts one’s pride. A death that preserves and elevates
our identity is much more consoling and satisfactory” because we have once
forgotten that we were once not at the top of the food chain. It is a humbling experience to go out into
nature without the safety of modern comforts, because even with a gun, there
are things bigger, and mightier than us. I think we often forget this because
we are not used to going out into the wilderness.
In the story The
Divine Soil I also agree with the author in that we (humans) do not
appreciate the true beauty of nature. We are so used to seeing nature that we
humor ourselves by making up things to replace it. He says, “We have invented
the whole machinery of the supernatural, with its unseen spirits and powers
good and bad, to account for things, because we found the universal everyday
nature too cheap, too common, and too vulgar.” I can relate to Burrough’s idea because we
take the idea of leaves turning beautiful colors, or the sun rising for granted.
We get bored with the idea of nature so we do not treat it with enough respect.
Word Count: 566
